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Posted: 2017-03-13 20:17:01

The Intrepid Seller

Somewhere down a gutter
with a long forgotten flutter
someone's misbegotten ways
have led to these past days.

Her abashments are uncounted
by those who are confounded
"She seems peculiar now even more"
but they've never truly cared before.

If she fell, they were not phased.
If she stood, they were apathetic.
Even though she's truly disconcerted
her facade seems paradisiatic.

She might be a great actor,
but wearing walls become a factor
in the line of business she's had to resort to.

She's known to be an adapter...
but this curse has ruined a chapter
in a life once potentially good.

The lads she chooses, to society, seem reputable,
but the way they make her contort, leaves this disputable.
'No kissing on the mouth, go straight down south...
...do this and I'll pay more for your trouble"

No feeling of paltriness quite compares
to being objectified by men who no longer care.
She's long lost her plight...
and is now known as the Lady of the night.

She stumbles in shambles after a hard day's work
but tomorrow is soon, around the corner it lurks.
Yet faithful like a saint, she begs every night
in hope of some god ending her perpetual fight.

"One day" - it came...
a gentle master who refrained.
He captivates her mind
and has her furthermore resigned.

With each stroke of kindness, she starts to breathe -
as he leans in closer, she starts to heave...
Caressing her body, he treats her like a queen,
making her wonder about something she had never seen...

For a moment in time,
the entire world disappeared.
Only these two souls entwined
and removed each other's fears.

Her desperate panting grows louder,
down come her defences...they shower,
overwhelmed by his power,
she gives in, and she devours.

At first, he did not notice, but he broke down all the walls.
How could he have known?
This child was broken before.
For the first time...to her, true kindness was shown.
This child is now a woman and knows she'll never truly be alone.


XoXoXoX Miss Inquisitive
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Posted: 2017-03-15 09:33:32

Very touching words!

Mwah
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Posted: 2017-03-15 09:42:02

The Intrepid Seller which was written by poet Sinead Terblanche!

On 2017-03-13 20:17:01 InquisitiveTwo said:
The Intrepid Seller

Somewhere down a gutter
with a long forgotten flutter
someone's misbegotten ways
have led to these past days.

Her abashments are uncounted
by those who are confounded
"She seems peculiar now even more"
but they've never truly cared before.

If she fell, they were not phased.
If she stood, they were apathetic.
Even though she's truly disconcerted
her facade seems paradisiatic.

She might be a great actor,
but wearing walls become a factor
in the line of business she's had to resort to.

She's known to be an adapter...
but this curse has ruined a chapter
in a life once potentially good.

The lads she chooses, to society, seem reputable,
but the way they make her contort, leaves this disputable.
'No kissing on the mouth, go straight down south...
...do this and I'll pay more for your trouble"

No feeling of paltriness quite compares
to being objectified by men who no longer care.
She's long lost her plight...
and is now known as the Lady of the night.

She stumbles in shambles after a hard day's work
but tomorrow is soon, around the corner it lurks.
Yet faithful like a saint, she begs every night
in hope of some god ending her perpetual fight.

"One day" - it came...
a gentle master who refrained.
He captivates her mind
and has her furthermore resigned.

With each stroke of kindness, she starts to breathe -
as he leans in closer, she starts to heave...
Caressing her body, he treats her like a queen,
making her wonder about something she had never seen...

For a moment in time,
the entire world disappeared.
Only these two souls entwined
and removed each other's fears.

Her desperate panting grows louder,
down come her defences...they shower,
overwhelmed by his power,
she gives in, and she devours.

At first, he did not notice, but he broke down all the walls.
How could he have known?
This child was broken before.
For the first time...to her, true kindness was shown.
This child is now a woman and knows she'll never truly be alone.


XoXoXoX Miss Inquisitive

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Posted: 2017-03-15 09:48:08

'Very insightful and meaningful,I love it! :)'
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Posted: 2017-04-13 01:12:31
Edited: 2017-04-13 01:35:44

Such a beautiful post and I can so relate to the author's feelings when she wrote this because she was writing about the same man I had fallen in love with a few years ago! Batman....ladies don't turn your back to soon because he will be flying off to the falls with his next, new fantasy.... He would wake you up with your toothpaste already squeezed on your toothbrush and left there waiting for you to brush your teeth, A cup of hot tea or coffee left next to the bed, perhaps not perfect but at least he attempt bed you to try be a gentleman...

Hiding silently in the shadows of ESA he has the upper hand of how to create the ultimate plan of deceit!

How many have of us ladies have traveled this journey with him...

The declaration of profound love... the sweeping you off your feet... How many of us have been left behind... and how many poor victims lay ahead? I wonder!
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Posted: 2017-04-13 08:19:06

Arz my beautiful friend.. we both know who you're talking about. Some people don't have lives and feel complete when they create havoc and mayhem.
I know you're not in a good space because of this, but revel in the beauty of your soul and stay true to yourself.
Love you my special friend
XOXOXO

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